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smiley09.gif posted on 7-30-2008 at 09:08 AM
November Crazy teens site established!


yay! now you can veiw the basic site as it is right now. If it is slow today it'll be because i'mm adding cool stuff to it. tell me what you think right here and give ideas for improvment!

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site: www.freewebs.com/crazy-teen-nanowrimo-writters/

[Edited on 7-30-2008 by writter_chick_94]




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[*] posted on 7-31-2008 at 10:36 AM


Has anybody actually visite the site?



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[*] posted on 8-1-2008 at 04:24 AM


Yeah, I have now.

You're taking constructive criticism, right?

Well, your spelling is a little off... I suppose it doesn't matter a whole amount on the page, but it might be difficult to find the site with the link having dodgy spelling.

And the music is a little... well, my speakers were on very, very low. But I could hear it. Music on webpages - I don't know about everyone else, I might be the exception - but not a very big fan...

But as far as aesthetics go, it looks pretty good. It looks very good... Better than I could do there.

But if I were you, I'd comb the site with a spellchecker and just get it sorted out. Be careful with your "your/you're" and "writer/writter" - they're the immediately obvious ones.

Then there is my pet peeve. Ellipses (I don't know how to spell that word, to be honest, sorry) are three dots, and consistency is good.

But I like it. If you get that sorted out (and I can't imagine it taking long) then I might be back for November... unless I'm a little too old, of course. :D

(And I'm sorry if that sounded harsh - its not meant to, I'm just not very good at controlling my tone in writing, although I'm working on it...)




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[*] posted on 8-1-2008 at 04:25 AM


Oh - its FAQs, not FQAs, I think. I forgot that one... I got distracted by all the various WriMos throughout the year... Oh God, I'm sticking to JulNo and maybe NaNo.



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[*] posted on 8-1-2008 at 10:34 AM


thanks for the help. i get right on fixing the site up!:D
p.s that wasn't harsh. I liked the help thanks.

[Edited on 8-1-2008 by writter_chick_94]




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[*] posted on 8-1-2008 at 10:51 AM


Actually you could be part of my staff for the site if you want to. What do you say?



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[*] posted on 8-1-2008 at 12:13 PM


Okay... I can tell you've made a few changes, but here are a couple more. First, I'll put your text, then I'll change it, if that's okay... Just spelling and grammar...

Wahoo! your a teen.... you're a writer... and you're probably crazy like me (or you probably wouldn't be here) During November I will be getting usefull stuff going on here so yay! but for now I'll work on making this site work. so go explore what little I have going on here and good day fellow teen writers!

Now, it probably should be more like...

Wahoo! You're a teen, you're a writer... and you're probably crazy like me (or you probably wouldn't be here). During November I will be getting useful stuff going on here so yay! But for now I'll work on making this site work. So go explore what little I have going on here and god day fellow teen writers!

Now, I have a comma obsession, and I was tempted to go mad, but that's my style, not yours.

Also, subscribe... Surely you mean 'until'..?

And finally, capital letters. There's a rule I learnt a long time ago and serves me well 90% of the time. If you're naming something, the title of a story or a forum or so on, capitalise key words.

For example, "News and Announcements", "Word Wars!", "The Talk Room". And always capitalise the first word.

I think I'm going a little too far now, but this is the sort of thing a word processor would sort out on its own, and you're probably not using one while making a website... :)




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[*] posted on 8-1-2008 at 02:38 PM


no no. i appreceate your help. you can keep it up through e-mail if you want.

p.s. do you think i should delete the game page and put something more usefull there?

[Edited on 8-1-2008 by writter_chick_94]




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2007NaNoWriMo: A New Dawning (winner)

2008 NaNoEdMo: 15 of 50 hours (lost)

2008 JulNoWriMo:The Renewal (winner)

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[*] posted on 8-1-2008 at 02:42 PM


I'll be part of your staff if you need me, and I suppose it would be a reason to do NaNo. I'm just a grammar freak, though.

Anyway, I signed up. :D




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NaNo \'07: 52,452 words.
JulNo \'08: 53,556 words.
NaNo \'08: epic fail.
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