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[*] posted on 7-17-2013 at 07:08 AM
First Sentence 2013!!!


This is a thread to post your first or two sentences from your JulNo novels or Fanfics you are writing this month. Here is mine...

Santiago is with his pack in a meeting to overlook what they will decide to hunt. He knows he will want to help provide his pack with some food.




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"Eric seems to be interested in me. I hope i can get to know him better. And not have my heart broken again." - Bella Swan from A Viking and his Shield
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[*] posted on 7-17-2013 at 12:50 PM


Mine (the first line of the prologue) - The walls of the Citadel had never frightened Lauren.

[Edited on 7-17-2013 by rowena]




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[*] posted on 7-17-2013 at 01:14 PM


First sentence of Red Pigeons, translated from German:

    The flow of people carries Shun Asamiya over the platform into the station concourse.




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[*] posted on 7-17-2013 at 05:43 PM


My first line : I was thinking about ending his life again.
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[*] posted on 7-17-2013 at 06:56 PM


My first sentence: Julian Saylor lurked at the edge of the party that had yet to really begin.

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[*] posted on 7-17-2013 at 06:59 PM


Mine: The hymn echoed around the cathedral as Zokash made his way toward the council room.




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[*] posted on 7-18-2013 at 09:29 AM


Here's mine. Technically 2 sentences, but meh:
“So Lullaby. How does it feel to be a side character?”
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[*] posted on 7-21-2013 at 01:27 PM


July caught me mid-story on something else I was hand writing.
So, this is was I was writing then:

"As long as it doesn't hurt, I won't complain." Docker half-shrugged.

And this is where I picked up the story I decided to 'use for July' even though I'm not going for 50k:

Yas wandered back inside, unconcerned to find Shann slouching on the bed. He often found her there when he came back from pacing his territory.
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[*] posted on 7-21-2013 at 05:35 PM


Without context, this just seems really weird... lols. I'm cheating by using more than one sentence.

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A female son, Meena complained to herself. It’s no fair. I guess that’s just the way I am.




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[*] posted on 7-22-2013 at 01:11 AM


On the Worst Day, Scott did not make pancakes.



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